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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like walking through a city at night and realising the darkness isn’t just outside — it’s in the mood of the whole world.

There’s this tired, almost bitter clarity in the way the lines move, like someone who’s seen too much to pretend anymore.

I felt that mix of old‑world language and modern chaos, like history and the present are collapsing into one long, uneasy night.

The images — dervishes, sepulchres, broken fame — feel like ghosts drifting through a world that’s lost its sense of direction.

There’s anger here, but also exhaustion, the kind that comes from watching the same madness repeat itself.

“Midnight comes early” hits hard; it’s exactly how it feels when everything darkens before you’re ready.

The poem has this rhythm of someone walking through shadows, pointing out every hypocrisy along the way.

I could feel the frustration with the noise, the slogans, the people shouting without listening.

By the end, there’s this heavy sense that the world keeps circling back to the same darkness.

It’s bleak, sharp, and strangely beautiful — the kind of piece that lingers long after you stop reading.

F.L by Scented Petals's avatar

Lovely poem! Thank you for sharing 🙏🏼✍🏼

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